2010, Form B. “You can leave
home all you want, but home will never leave you.” —Sonsyrea Tate
Sonsyrea Tate’s statement suggests
that “home” may be conceived of as a dwelling, a place, or a
state of mind. It may have positive or negative associations, but in
either case, it may have a considerable influence on an individual.
Choose a novel or play in which a central character leaves home yet
finds that home remains significant. Write a well-developed essay in
which you analyze the importance of “home” to this character and
the reasons for its continuing influence. Explain how the character’s
idea of home illuminates the larger meaning of the work. Do not
merely summarize the plot.
For a small individual, home often means security, comfort, and
predictability. Without these, he feels out of place, exposed to the
dangers of the outside world. No doubt, this was how Bilbo Baggins felt
as he was carried away from home to begin Tolkein's novel, The Hobbit.
Not even a day's journey from his house, he already began wishing for
his handkerchief. Utilizing Bilbo's original fear of leaving his
"comfort zone," Tolkein emphasizes his message for us that,
insignificant as we may appear, each of us has the capacity to use the
skills learned inside our own fields to greatly affect the world beyond.
To start the novel, Tolkein immediately describes Bilbo's character,
explaining that he comes from a land where the inhabitants ostracize,
and even despise, adventurous people. He likes to think of himself as a
typical hobbit, practical, so as to avoid unexpected hazards. This serves him well and makes him a valuable asset on the journey, as he is able to arrive at the simplest, most effective solutions to the problems at hand. Hundreds of miles from his own home, Bilbo is still solving problems as if he were in his own home in the Shire.
An inhabitant of a peaceful area, Bilbo bears no grudges or ill-will against anyone the way the dwarves did against the elves and men. As the neutral party in the conflict, Bilbo becomes the perfect mediator between the dwarves and the men and elves. Perhaps he was not received too well for his actions, but his peaceful background gave him the sense not to push for war like the others. He saw past the past grievances and looked to form a compromise that would be beneficial to both camps.
A character's home is often the best place to explore in order to understand his comfort zones and deepest of character qualities. Bilbo was a hobbit of comfort and peace. He ordered his home to be as practical as possible not only for his own needs, but also for guests. Leaving his home may have meant leaving his comfort zone, but true to Sonsyrea Tate's words, home, his most cherished values, never left him.
Hey Noah!
ReplyDeleteGood job on this! You did a really nice job of writing an effective essay without making it too long. Really the only thing I might suggest is to very sentence length/structure more; it seems like you have a lot of complex sentences with a lot of commas. Other than that, this is a really good essay!
You did a really nice job of summarizing the story without making it over the top! I never read The Hobbit and you effectively made your point to me without it being over the top. Nice job! I agree with Brianna, some of the diction and syntax could be improved but overall, really good job.
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